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Thursday 22 June 2017

The girl and the fox

Earlier this term we watched a video called the girl and the fox. From the video we identified the 8 main events as a class. After that we had to choose one main event to write about. Here are the 8 main events.

8 main events

・Opening scene- Girl finds a dead bird.
・Girl goes in search of a creature killing the birds.
・Sees fox for the first time, it jumps over her and runs off.
・She catches the fox, pins it down, knife to throat, couldn’t kill it.
・It starts to snow. She gets lost in the woods.
・She collapses.
・The fox comes and snuggles the girl for warmth.

・In the morning, family finds her and takes her home.

The highlighted event is the one that I chose to write about.
Here is my writing.

Feeling lost, the girl suddenly fell to the ground. As she unconsciously laid there on the cold ground, the same white furred fox that she attempted to kill, quickly wrapped itself around the poor little girl to keep her nice and warm. The girl slowly opens her eyes in confusion as to why the fox wants to keep her warm after she almost put this fox to death. Then, she calmly closes her eyes and falls into a nice and relaxing sleep.

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